Tuesday, November 8, 2011

The Burger



Had our critique on the food shoot today.  Our team created a scrumptious looking cheeseburger meal.



Here are the client's comments:
Looks real tasty everything fresh.    
Suggestion of moisture on cup good.    
Burger, ingredients looks like a good portion.   
Moisture on meat good.  
Looks hot.

And these are the instructor's comments
Excellent arrangement of fries
Cloth handled well in back
Watch sesame retouching-double images 
Bun looks great
Good selection and arrangement of produce on burger
Watch little lettuce area on far left...

Finally got an A, unfortunately not too sure it is the grade I would have given myself :( It's not terrible, but after seeing it projected on a huge screen - I see some things I think we should have changed.  

That little piece of lettuce leaf on the left side has a bit too much oil - instead of making it look fresh and crisp and looks a little oily and flat. Wish we had pushed the pickle under the bun a bit more and pulled the meat out on the left side. 

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