OK, so I am really glad I reread the directions before I sent this file off to be printed. Due Tuesday.
Grading Criteria:
Image is lit beautifully
Concept is carried out properly
CREATIVITY!!!
Grade: C+ :(
Here are the concerns: "From the top, there is an odd little piece of black, which has a bit of a dent in it. I think it may be best to just have the purple go to the top or to have the black part be straighter if it is necessary to show.
The slight shadow on the background bothers me, but not as much as all the marks on the seamless by the shoes... Cynthia!!!! I am giving you a look right now.
Finally, the shoes themselves. The highlights on top are blinding. I am having trouble seeing now without spots in my eyes. Even though these are glossy shoes, we still need to light them correctly. Also watch the inside of the shoe we are seeing - distracting. (Might as well take out the little seam thing below the "Think", and leave just a bit more space between the k and the O (Think Outside).
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